Mr Belarus: Issy I think you did everything right here but he just wasn't looking your way...which is one of the down sides of working in a group with one subject they are never looking where you want when you want!
2 Spainish Ladies? I'm not sure why you trashed this one...I think it's got lost going for it...I like the full frame...how the girls heads are leaning in on the diagonal...the slightly low perspective and they have a lovely natural expression..plus the red and black is a great eye popping combo...I think you should reconsider this one
The 'boobs' man ...I think it is perhaps a tad dark and perhaps suffers from you not getting a direct gaze...a slightly lower perspective would have helped the 'boobs' look even more massive!!
The Cave women: I rather like her... I would crop the guy on the left...I like here wrinkled smile (she probably wouldn't) and her huge Bedrock necklace
I dream of genie again this just suffers because you didn't get a good position to shoot from...nothing you've done wrong...exposure is good and fills the frame well...it's just harder to make the images engaging from that higher side angle
The pimps not sure what you don't like about this...I think it's pretty good...nice low angle... and full frame...good clean background...good exposure...what did you want from it that you didn't feel you got??
Batgirl
Again it suffers from a not fantastic shooting angle and a lack of direct eye contact its also a smidgen soft
Issy most of these ones you've rejected have issues not through anything you've done wrong but rather from not great positioning and that's sometimes the down side of working in a group and not always being able to get the position you want that will give you the shot you're looking for
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ReplyDeleteMr Belarus: Issy I think you did everything right here but he just wasn't looking your way...which is one of the down sides of working in a group with one subject they are never looking where you want when you want!
2 Spainish Ladies?
I'm not sure why you trashed this one...I think it's got lost going for it...I like the full frame...how the girls heads are leaning in on the diagonal...the slightly low perspective and they have a lovely natural expression..plus the red and black is a great eye popping combo...I think you should reconsider this one
The 'boobs' man
...I think it is perhaps a tad dark and perhaps suffers from you not getting a direct gaze...a slightly lower perspective would have helped the 'boobs' look even more massive!!
The Cave women: I rather like her... I would crop the guy on the left...I like here wrinkled smile (she probably wouldn't) and her huge Bedrock necklace
I dream of genie
again this just suffers because you didn't get a good position to shoot from...nothing you've done wrong...exposure is good and fills the frame well...it's just harder to make the images engaging from that higher side angle
The pimps
not sure what you don't like about this...I think it's pretty good...nice low angle... and full frame...good clean background...good exposure...what did you want from it that you didn't feel you got??
Batgirl
Again it suffers from a not fantastic shooting angle and a lack of direct eye contact its also a smidgen soft
Issy most of these ones you've rejected have issues not through anything you've done wrong but rather from not great positioning and that's sometimes the down side of working in a group and not always being able to get the position you want that will give you the shot you're looking for